Lurking inside,
Like a serpent's tongue,
Slithering out,
With venomous words,
Poisoning the love,
For the world,
With bitter, harsh expressions,
Full of hate and disgust.
Sucking deeper,
Like a black hole,
With endless impossibilities,
Full of dread and fear,
Dark facts stinging,
Like flying bats,
Grabbing the flesh and,
Biting skin deep into reality.
Like a serpent's tongue,
Slithering out,
With venomous words,
Poisoning the love,
For the world,
With bitter, harsh expressions,
Full of hate and disgust.
Sucking deeper,
Like a black hole,
With endless impossibilities,
Full of dread and fear,
Dark facts stinging,
Like flying bats,
Grabbing the flesh and,
Biting skin deep into reality.
12 comments:
Love comes in all colors !
some are too dark to comprehend.
Very strong write !!
Quite dark
But very strong.
Glad you wrote it.
For sometimes writing it out is the key :)
another great wrk...
This is written so amazingly. The kind of post I always enjoy reading. And this was so strong. Amazing...
Felt good to write :) thank you!
Thank God for you!! I would not have written this had you not egged me on .. :)
Thanks Sid :)
Bright and dark - two sides of the same coin .. Thanks :)
Let not
each word you write
be chiselled and carved
with Occam's razor.
Piercing hearts
is also a doctor's game.
While he cleans the dark,
swindles life;
She with her blades of gazes,
amongst the war of emotions,
makes it worth the life
his quill always seeked.
very dark and very strong.
Bravely you have chosen the right words to write this poem.
A beautiful dark side I saw today!
Mere post par chaar chaand lag gaye yeh likh kar.. Thank you!
Thank you dear Aavi.. :) I like this.
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