Breathing deeply.
Feeling breathless.
Choking pain.
Fighting tears.
Slamming doors.
Howling at nights.
Screaming lungs out.
Jealous rages.
Unfulfilled desires.
Angry songs.
Sad tunes.
Sleepless nights.
Buckets of ice-cream.
Broken glass.
Slit wrists.
12 comments:
ur wrds really talk about the pain in love...nycly written n I guess u just wrote it...amazing wrk so..
This is so much like the one I wrote yesterday but better written :)
And this is the style I was trying to tell you when you said can't write..brainstorm into one para :)
Lovely :)
Intense.
Thanks Sid .. Yes it was one of those days .. Feel better after this.
Hai na? I also thought so. One paragraph full of slam dunks ;)
Yes, Rhian. Just one of those days. Dark day.
wooo...powerful imagery. well done! I could hear doors slamming!
Superbly executed. Loved it
Haha .. Believe me, they did ;) thanks!
You're very kind Ankit!
Fun in the begging but literally 'ouch' at the end. It made me happy, a little sad, made me think deep but also hurt somewhere. was like a collection of all emotions in just a few words. How do you manage to do it?! You are awesome!
Shukriya dost! It's a humble effort and you're too magnanimous with compliments! :)
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