Tuesday, October 01, 2013

She'll Never Bear (Day 1)


That moment, when I knew
That she would never bear,
Wrenches my heart,
Like a piercing drill,
With a resounding shrill,
Penetrating like a saw,
The same saw that took it all,
Left her covered in liquid red,
Quivering without her womanhood,
Dawning upon her, alas!
Oh, but she would never bear,
The beautiful litter,
That she could have had,
Those that she could have called her own,
To take her loneliness away,
And fill the scar that was left behind,
With a sweetness so soft,
That the scar would throw itself open, 
Expelling the pain, that gift from nature, 
Embracing the love from that sweetness so tightly,
Sewing up the opening,
Softly, without a scar.

10 comments:

Lady Whispers said...

Wow.
You are such awesome a writer.
I knew it but reading it made me go woooah this girl is talent.
I think reading you will make me learn :)

Pratibha said...

I some how was expecting such strong write. This is much more impactful.

Awesome job :)

Sonalika Chaturvedi said...

Many thanks! It's all thanks to you Nimue ... Your gentle push means I must make you proud ... love you.

Sonalika Chaturvedi said...

Thanks Milady :) Your comment just warned my heart :)

Life through my eyes ....... said...

Strong!!!

Sonalika Chaturvedi said...

Yes my little one - this was for her pain.

Unknown said...

Very impressive close to the poem

Sonalika Chaturvedi said...

This poem meant a lot - this moment was scary - but it's over, words have remained

Thank you.

Abhinav Chandel said...

Yes, this poem was the day 1, the first poem, and which showed me how wonderful a human and writer you are.

Sonalika Chaturvedi said...

Yes, the same one .. thanks Abhinav!:)